1 hour (non-messy) messaging makeover
no zooms. no small talk. Not a single moment of wasted time
Hand me your mess
I go in, no snorkel
No Zooms. No performative brainstorming. No “tell me more” while the clock ticks.
I go straight to the sticky bits:
- what you’re actually selling (and what you’re accidentally implying)
- why people aren’t getting it fast
- where your message loses traction
- the one angle you keep stepping around because it feels too bold (it’s usually the good one)
Then I build you a simple messaging map you can follow without falling into your own internal quagmire.
"Her wordsmithing is nothing short of outstanding… she makes copy jump off the page and land in your lap, just like an enthusiastic puppy."
I’ll make this easy.
You buy. You get a link and a tiny questionnaire that forces your brain to stop being cute and start being clear.
Then you drop in your biggest messaging headache: the page, the offer, the “what do I even say,” the thing you keep rewriting until it turns into beige soup.
You can include:
- the link (Sales page / email funnel copy/ Home page)
- the exact moment people get confused (or a guesstimate)
- what you wish people would understand in 10 seconds
- any “please don’t make me sound like a corporate toaster” boundaries
"I can’t believe how much information Jay crammed in!! Seriously amazing value and totally targeted to my specific needs."
1 hour. No Zooms, no fluffing. 1 heck of an upgrade when I'm done with your thing.
$444 AUD
Super limited spots. Feel free to email me before you add to cart if you have specific deadtimes or time crunches.
